J3/02-116r1 Date: 26 February 2002 To: J3 From: Van Snyder Subject: Comments on Sections 13 and 14 1. Edits 279:13 [There is an extra blank between ``The'' and ``model'' that is caused by the presence of four index items that have blanks between them. Ironically, two of them are for the real model. Editor: Move the index items for the integer model to be before ``The'', without any blanks between or after them. Similarly move the index items for real bit models to [279:16].] 280:3 [Using ``when'' isn't right. Editor: ``when ... form'' => ``if the keyword form is used''.] 325:7-18 [Indentation got lost in Frame conversion. Use same indentation as at [324:28-39] in 01-007r3.] 330:4 [Editor: Delete first ``of''.] 350:29 [Using ``whenh'' isn't right (and it wouldn't be right without the typo). Editor: ``whenh ... form'' => ``if the keyword form is used''.] 2. What does ``valued'' contribute? The editor wonders (in 02-101) about the necessity to use ``may be scalar or array valued'' instead of ``may be a scalar or an array'' in the description of IEEE functions. One might also wonder what ``valued'' or ``-valued'' contributes in other places -- and why it's hyphenated in two places but not elsewhere. 277:13-14 [Editor: Delete ``-valued'' twice.] 298:31 [Editor: ``array valued and of rank one'' => ``a rank-one array''.] 299:1 [Editor: ``array valued and of rank one'' => ``a rank-one array''. Hmmm. More work is needed in the macros -- the \intrinarg macro only generates one line number for all of the lines of an intrinsic function argument.] 311:28 [Editor: Insert ``a'' before ``scalar''; ``array valued'' => ``an array''.] 315:7-8 [Editor: ``array valued and'' => ``an array of'' twice.] 337:14,18 [Editor: ``array valued'' $\Rightarrow$ ``an array'' twice.] 340:8-9 [Also run-on sentences. Editor: ``and ... valued'' => ``. It may be a scalar or an array'' twice.] 340:13-16 [Editor: ``array valued'' => ``an array'' thrice.] 342:10 [Editor: ``array valued and'' => ``an array''.] [Editor: ``scalar or array valued'' => ``a scalar or an array'' at the following places:] 291:33 & 298:12 & 300:24 & 305:7 & 310:25 & 311:22 & 316:22 & 319:27 & 326:14 326:26 & 327:30 & 329:11 & 335:2 & 337:8 & 339:29 & 362:2 & 362:16 & 363:1 363:27 & 364:3 & 364:16 & 364:30 & 365:8 & 364:21 [401:24] Delete the glossary entry for "array-valued". Editor: Change "array-valued" to "an array" or similar language in any other places throughout the document. Change any other "-valued" to similar terms as appropriate throughout the document. 3. Remarks without edits 351:22-23 The editor's qualms about spacing (expressed in 02-101) are well-founded. It's not clear why list environments behave like this. Some investigation is needed. Refer this issue to editor for consideration.