J3/04-008 Date: 2004/11/11 To: J3 From: Malcolm Cohen Subject: Editorial enhancements for future Draft revisions This is the editor's list of things which have been and are being considered for future Draft revisions. A. Post-DIS pre-publication edits --------------------------------- (This section is conditional depending on whether we end up with 04-007 as the base document, or something else.) 1. Edits for table 15.2 in c15.tex Replace line 419 by \multicolumn{3}{|l|}{} \\[-10pt] (making it the same as line 409). Replace the "|l|" at line 483 by "|p{5.625in}|". 2. Change comma to period at end of [126:4] 3. Delete stray '"' at end of [367:35] 4. [407:27] Change "index-name" to "". B. Agreed post-publication edits -------------------------------- [259:11] Typeset ", alternate return," in obsolescent font. [265:18] Remove extraneous quotation mark at the end of the line. [307:26] Insert "for the default character type" at the end of the sentence. [331:16-17] Change 'MAX((/"A","Z"/),(/"BB","Y "/))' to 'MAX(["A","Z"],["BB","Y "])'. [335:40-41] Change "true... than 1" to "independent of the declared lower bounds for A". [336:3] Change "true ... than 1" to "independent of the declared lower bounds for B". C. Edits under consideration ---------------------------- 1. [279:22-25] Constraints C1234 and C1235 refer to RESULT which no longer appears in the referenced syntax rule R1224. Perhaps they should be reworded, moved, or the reference changed. 2. The construction "...; otherwise ..." sometimes has a comma after the otherwise, sometimes not. Even when the elided text is otherwise identical. The editor should pick one and change all the dozens of others to match.