07-189r2 To: J3 Subject: Comments on Clause 6 From: Van Snyder Date: 9 May 2007 1 Edits Edits refer to 07-007r1. Page and line numbers are displayed in the margin. Absent other instructions, a page and line number or line number range implies all of the indicated text is to be replaced by associated text, while a page and line number followed by + (-) indicates that associated text is to be inserted after (before) the indicated line. Remarks are noted in the margin, or appear between [ and ] in the text. [119:9] ------------------------------------------------------------------ [Editor: Insert "data" before "pointer".] [120:24] ----------------------------------------------------------------- [Duplicates [19:22]. Editor: Delete the paragraph. [124:7] ------------------------------------------------------------------ [Editor: Replace "that" by "its".] [125:0+] ----------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Continuation of Table 6.1 needs a heading.] [126:4-7] ---------------------------------------------------------------- [The many-one array section restriction is needlessly complicated by singling out only the two possible cases of its appearance in a variable definition context. It would be simpler to say "variable definition context." The subclause would be clearer if this material were after material on the more general case. Editor: Move "A many-one . . . statement" to be a new paragraph at [126:10+]. Then replace "appear . . . statement" by "not appear in a variable-definition context (16.6.7)".] [128:1,5] ---------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Replace "a " by "" twice.] [130:35-36] -------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Delete "An unsaved . . . unallocated." since that's covered by [130:30].] [133:18] ----------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Insert "The" before "".] [134:4] ------------------------------------------------------------------ [Editor: Insert "The" before "".]