J3/08-157r1 To: J3 From: Van Snyder Subject: Even more editorial stuff Date: 2008 13 May Reference: 08-007r2 [276: C1202] ----------------------------------------------------------- The first sentence of C1202 is just a subset of the remainder of the constraint. Editor: Delete the useless first sentence of C1202. [277: 12.4.3.2p1] ------------------------------------------------------ The first sentence of 12.4.3.2p1 has grammatical problems. The second sentence is wrong. Editor: In the first sentence of 12.4.3.2p1 replace "the procedures" by "each procedure" to agree with the singular form "a <>". Delete the second sentence. [277: 12.4.3.2p7] ------------------------------------------------------ Editor: Move "for an external procedure" from the end of the first sentence to be after "explicit specific interface". Editor: In "\obs{An interface for a procedure named by an ENTRY statement... body.}" replace "named" by "defined".