To: J3 J3/15-221 From: Dan Nagle Subject: Introductory Comments Date: 2015 September 18 Reference: 15-007r2 I suspect this may be passed directly to /Edit. Below are some suggested edits for the Introduction. I found one typo. And theres no mention of TEAMS, which ought to be mentioned, as it is one of the major items on the 18508. I suppose TEAMS could be mentioned in the "Execution control" section, but might be better in the "described by 18508" section. Edits: {remove constriction} xviii, pp2, second bullet, last sentence: delete "constrict" {add TEAMS to Intro} xix, pp2 (from pervious page), bullet titled "Features perviously described by ISO/IEC TS 18508:2015" before the first sentence of the paragraph, insert "TEAMS allow a group of images to collaborate among themselves independently of other images."