To: J3 Members J3/16-147r2 From: Van Snyder & Robert Corbett Subject: Editorial comments on Annex A Reference: 16-007 Date: 2016 February 11 [509:25] Replace "specifier on the" with "specifier in an". {Use the same style as is used for the RECL= specifier.} [510:1] Replace ", as described in 9.6.4.5.2" with "(9.6.4.5.2)". {This style isn't used elsewhere in Annex A.} [512:1] Replace "if more than one error condition is detected" with "if more than one error condition could be detected". {To remove absurdity.} [512:9-10] Move the phrase "o the requirements ... (15.2.3.4)" to [511:36+]. Line [511:36] is "o the initial halting mode (14.6)". {Put the dependency in subclause order.} [512:12} Replace the comma at the end of the line with a semicolon. {For consistency with the other lines.}