07-182 To: J3 From: Van Snyder Subject: Comments on the Foreword and Introduction Date: 2007 April 23 1 Edits Edits refer to07-007r1. Page and line numbers are displayed in the margin. Absent other instructions, a page and line number or line number range implies all of the indicated text is to be replaced by associated text, while a page and line number followed by + (-) indicates that associated text is to be inserted after (before) the indicated line. Remarks are noted in the margin, or appear between [ and ] in the text. [xiv(4)] ----------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Replace "may" by "might".] [xiv(6)+2]--------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Replace "15391" by "1539-1".] [xiv(6)+2]--------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Insert ", and Type-2 Technical Report 19767.] [xvi] -------------------------------------------------------------------- [Editor: Insert "Processor dependencies D" after "Extended notes" and update the "D" and "E" on the next two lines to "E" and "F" (aren't these done with \ref?). Page 1 of 1