J3/09-246r2 To: J3 From: Malcolm Cohen Subject: Wording, cross references... concerning termination Date: 2009 August 11 1. Introduction The handling of image and program termination is slightly unclear because - "termination" is defined in 2.3.5 but is not indexed and often not cross-referenced (or cross-referenced wrongly); - some places talk about image termination, others about program termination. 2. Discussion Most of this will be fixed simply by indexing "termination". Should "normal termination" and "error termination" be indexed too? Since they are both defined in the same place, this paper proposes only indexing "termination". In the case of error termination, there is no difference between termination of an image and termination of a program, by 09-007r2 [34:2-3] which states "If an image initiates error termination, all other images that have not already initiated termination initiate error termination." Given this statement, it seems better to say things like "error termination is initiated" without adding of "of the image" or "of the program". 3. Edits w.r.t. 09-007r2 [33:24] Index "termination" here. [195:9] "error termination of execution is initiated" ->"error termination is initiated". {Improve consistency and readability.} [198:10-11] "termination of image execution not caused by an error condition" ->"normal termination". {Improve consistency and readability.} [241:5,22,40] After "error termination" delete "of the program", thrice. {Improve consistency and readability.} [348:4] After "error termination" delete "of execution of the image". {Improve consistency and readability.} [462:22] Delete "of execution", replace "8.4" (D8:STOP and ALL STOP statements) by "2.3.5" (D2:Execution sequence), move that list item to [461:16+]. 4. Rejected edits [128:29 6.7.1.2p9]------------------------------------------------------ Editor: Insert "(2.3.5) of the image" after "termination". {Discussion p2.} [130:15 6.7.3.1p3]------------------------------------------------------ Editor: Insert "(2.3.5) of the image" after "termination". {Discussion p2.} [195:9 8.5.7p4]--------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "of execution" by "(2.3.5) of the image". {Alternative wording improvement done instead - discussion p2.} [198:10-11 9.2.4p1]----------------------------------------------------- Normal and error termination are described in 2.3.5. Use that here. Editor: Replace "termination of image execution not caused by an error condition" by "normal image termination (2.3.5)". {Alternative wording improvement done instead - discussion p2.} [210:20 9.5.6.18p2]----------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "of the program" by "(2.3.5) of the image". {In this specific case, "program" is correct and "image" would be wrong.} [211:1 9.5.7p6]--------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "(2.3.5) of termination of execution of a program" by "normal termination (2.3.5) of an image". {Existing wording correct, suggested wording wrong.} [241:5 9.11.2p2]-------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "of the program" by "(2.3.5) of the image". {Alternative wording improvement done instead - discussion p2.} [241:22 9.11.3p1]------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "of the program" by "(2.3.5) of the image". {Alternative wording improvement done instead - discussion p2.} [241:40 9.11.4p1]------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "of the program" by "(2.3.5) of the image". {Alternative wording improvement done instead - discussion p2.} [348:4 13.7.57p6]------------------------------------------------------- Editor: Replace "of execution" by "(2.3.5)". {Alternative wording improvement done instead - discussion p2.} ===END===