09-297 To: J3 From: Malcolm Cohen Subject: Editor's report for 09-007r3 Date: 2009 November 04 1. Introduction --------------- This document describes the changes between 09-007r2 and 09-007r3, and in particular the differences between the edits passed at meeting 189 and the edits actually applied to the 007 document. All the UTIs have been resolved. No new UTIs were added. 2. Entered papers ----------------- 246r2 - indexed "normal termination" and "error termination", not bare "termination" because that is used for things other than terminating the program/image. 250r1 - 2nd edit "name of the" before "result variable" instead of "name" after "result variable", for // with prev sentence. 251r1 - first edit made a 2-elt list into a 3-elt list: fixed format; deleted UTI 165. 253r2 - unchanged. 256r1 - unchanged. 249r2aa - rejected the last edit; this is just a descriptive subtitle, changing it makes it a nonsense subtitle. 257r3 - dehyphenated "inter-dependencies". 259 - unchanged. 268 - unchanged. 273r1aa - plus deleted UTI 167. - this note is still confusing, since it implies that an image can go along making local copies and deferring writing its changes back, but if ATOMIC_REF is then used it throws away the changes and uses the old value. I wish people could restrain themselves from restating normative text "more informatively" but wrongly. 274r2 - Made "Segment" capitalisation in the example consistent. Made the "! Segment" comments all line up. Retained the definite article in "the work". 241r2 - used "a subcomponent" instead of "an ultimate component" in the edit for [127:18+]. inserted "an" after insertion in edit for [400:33]. 252r2 - unchanged, including deletion of UTI 166. 275r1 - unchanged. 276r1 - [464:2+] "STATUS"->"CMDSTAT or STATUS". 277r1 - unchanged. 278r1 - unchanged. 280 - unchanged. 283r1 - added colon after "For example", adjusted indentation. 285 Entered after the meeting (no verbal report) 238r3 - entered without the comma. 282r3 - [172:20-21] Use syntax term (italics) not bold. [186:19-20] Did not embolden "GO TO statement". Also fixed typesetting of i^th at [186:27]; a quick grep shows there are lots more that are wrong though. [186:34-35] should have been [186:34]; I think. [312:1] Also fixed typesetting of n^th. 284r1 - I don't know what [46:8]--[98:1+n] is supposed to mean; I treated it as being two edits, one at [46:8], the other at [98:1+n]. [149:2] No, deleted "current" instead. [208:21] etc. Random numbers of hyphens are no substitute for commas. Do not use inventive typography instead of clear instructions. And I only delete something once, but there are six places? Give me a break. [406:21] Already done by another paper. This one was so painful I didn't check the results properly; I checked page 177 and that seemed ok. 286 - [408:6,...] Same change also applied to [408:18]. [421:18] I thought this could be better worded, but entered it as it was. It would be useful if IEEE infinity/NaN were properly indexed; I did not do that. 3. Further editorial changes. ----------------------------- Further editorial changes made after the meeting. New document number is N1791. [25:9] Removed extraneous double-quote character. [215:9] Deleted extraneous paragraph number. [Index] Attempted to put some whitespace between the heading and the introductory witter paragraph. "In this annex"->"In the index". [Index] Fixed both LH and RH footers. End of changes for 2009/08/19. [57, C418] Fixed the list in the constraint to make it properly indented. [212 etc.] Fixed problem with spurious page breaks in the midst of constraints. [417:34,418:12,418:27] Removed spurious paragraph numbers. [469:31],[470:27,28,30],[471:36],[472:6,14,31][473:9,18] Ditto. [474:3],[475:3],[477:28],[478:11,39],[479:25,42],[480:18] Ditto. [481:21],[482:11,16,22],[483:7,39],[484:17],[485:3,15,29] Ditto. [486:16,26,38],[487:9,26,35],[497:18],[498:9,33],[499:6] Ditto. [513:24,40],[514:11,26,40],[515:13,22,25],[516:3],[517:37,39] Ditto. [518:22],[525:3],[527:2,4,19] Ditto. [2:normative refs] ditto (the list is not a set of paragraphs). [2-21:terms and defs] ditto (they all say para 1). End of changes for 2009/08/21. Fixed typos in new material (refs are to draft 09-007r3 as of 2009/08/21): [xiii] "canculate"->"calculate". [xiv] "semi-colon"->"semicolon". [33] indexed "normal termination" here as well as p32. [348] "non-zero"->"nonzero". End of changes for 2009/08/25. ===END===