J3/15-251 To: J3 From: Dan Nagle Subject: comments on clause six (and one in the forward) Date: 2015 October 14 Reference: 15-007r2 This is mostly typos and similar, perhaps this paper can be passed directly to the Editor. Edits: [xvii:10] {part 3 is withdrawn so delete the reference} delete the line {subgroup defers to the editor on whether this is important, but the verb tense is bad English- "none" is singular} {correct the verb} [121:24] change "are pointers" to "is a pointer" (or "has the pointer attribute") {what is the "allocation transfer procedure" ? I hope it's move_alloc() } {use same language as previous paragraph} [131:9-10] 6.7.1.3 change "allocation transfer procedure" to "intrinsic procedure MOVE_ALLOC"