To: J3 J3/16-218r1 From: R. Bader & Stan Whitlock Subject: remove duplication in Appendix C Date: 2016 June 06 References: 16-007r1 Discussion: ~~~~~~~~~~~ The Appendix C subsections C.10 and C.11 both refer to clause 13. Some duplication of material has arisen: both C.10.1 and C.11.2 contain examples for the use of atomic subroutines; the latter subsection appears to contain the full set of the examples from TS 18508 while the former one (already present in 16-007) contains only two. This paper suggests fusing and cleaning up C.10 and C.11. Also, some minor issues in C.5.9 are fixed. Edits: ~~~~~~ [552:5] Replace "A.2.1" by "C.10.2" and make "C.10.2" a hyperlink; it is a bit infelicitous that the two examples have moved so far apart. {added "C10.2. a hyperlink} [552:20] fix broken link syntax for EVENT_TYPE {add "syntax"} [586:19] Delete heading for "C.11 Clause 13 Notes" which makes sections C.11.* into C.10.next. {add explanation of section renumbering that should happen automatically} [587:5]-[588:23] Delete duplicated text for atomic usage. [588:24]-[589:18] Move examples 3 and 4 to [584:35+].