To: J3 Members J3/16-252 From: Van Snyder Subject: Comments on Clause 4 References: 16-007r2 Date: 2016 September 28 [27:12 fourth list item in 4.1.1p1] After "two-" insert " or three-". {See, e.g. C8113.} [32:12-17 4.3.6p5] Subclauses 4.3.5 and 4.3.7 use complete sentences in their lists. Subclause 4.3.6 has a telegraph style. Editor's choice whether to do anything about it. [32:37 4.3.7p1(4) Replace "will be" with "is" for consistency with the style in 4.3.4p4. [32:38 4.3.7p1(4) Replace "will appear" with "appears" for consistency with the style in 4.3.4p4. [32:42 4.3.7p1(4) Replace "will differ" with "differs" for consistency with the style in 4.3.4p4. [32:43 4.3.7p1(4) Replace "will be different" with "differs" for consistency with the style in 4.3.4p4. [33:13 4.4.3p1] Replace "code" with "programs". According to [1:6 1p1] this document provides a standard for programs, not code.