J3/97-255 To: J3 / R. Maine From: R. Bleikamp Date: Nov. 10,1997 Subject: Notes on 97-007r1 Async Edits Corrections to 97-007r1 1) Section 4.4.1 [38:43], change ASYNCHROUNOUS to ASYNCHRONOUS 2) Section 9.3.4.11 [145:4], change YES to NO. 3) Section 9.4.1.10 [150:12], change "in" to "is". Suggestions: 1) Section 9.4.4 [154:12-13], add "subsequent" between "a" and "statement". There are then 2 "subsequent"s in this sentence. 2) Section 9.5 [157:38-39], move "simultaneously" to be the last word in the sentence. 3) Section 9.6 [159:21], change "any" to "all". 4) Section 9.7.1.23 [164:36], delete "previously".