To: J3 J3/10-104r1 From: Malcolm Cohen Subject: Misc editorial fixes from Ballot Date: 2010 February 15 This paper collects together simple change suggestions from the Ballot summary, N1802, so they can be organized as a paper for /Edit. Included comments are: GB-5 - extraneous 'the' in 1.3.143.2 JP-1 - Section reference in C standard is incorrect in Note 2.16. There is no 6.5.5.3 in the C standard, the correct section is 6.7.5.3 Function declarators (including prototypes). GB-8 - Inconsistent case usage in Note 4.24. JP-3 - Wrong reference in 7.1.6.1. JP-4 - Wrong reference in 7.1.6.1. JP-5 - Wrong reference in 7.1.6.1. JP-6 - Wrong reference in 7.2.1.4. JP-7 - Wrong reference in 7.2.1.4. GB-10 - extraneous 'the' in 7.2.2.4. JP-9 - comma should be COMMA in 10.10.4 JP-10 - comma should be COMMA in 12.11.3.5. JP-13 - MIN in e_min should be lowercase in 13.7.157. GB-19 - missing space in 14.11.24. GB-20 - missing space in 14.11.26. GB-21 - incorrect cross-reference in 16.3.1. 12.4.3.2 is Interface block, whereas the correct reference is 12.4.3.4 Generic interfaces. GB-22 - 'data' is plural, fix 'data is' in 16.6.5. JP-17 - wrong style of quote marks in example in C.6.3. GB-23 - 'data' is plural, fix "data is' in C.11.1. The following comments are covered in Paper J3/10-101: GB-16 - wrong result in example of 13.7.111. GB-17 - wrong formula in example of 13.7.150. Edits to J3/09-007r3: [20:22] In 1.3.143.2 "lock variable", delete the second "the" in the definition. {GB-5} [39:Note 2.16] In the first note of 2.5.7 "Companion processors", in the last line of the second paragraph, replace "6.5.5.3" with "6.7.5.3". {JP-1} [65:Note 4.24] 4.5.3.2 "Type parameter order", 1st note, text following the code example, replace "T1" with "t1", "K1" with "k1" (twice), "K2" with "k2" (twice), "T2" with "t2", and "K3" with "k3"; all in code font. {GB-8, Convert these names to lower case.} [146:11] In 7.1.6.1 "Defined operations/Definitions", at the end of paragraph 1, replace the reference "4.5.2" with "4.5.5". {JP-3, 4.5.2 is Derived type definition, whereas 4.5.5 is Type-bound procedures where the GENERIC statement is documented.} [146:18] In 7.1.6.1 "Defined operations/Definitions", in paragraph 2, list item (2)(b), replace the reference "4.5.2" with "4.5.5". {JP-4} [146:34] In 7.1.6.1 "Defined operations/Definitions", in paragraph 5, list item (2)(b), replace the reference "4.5.2" with "4.5.5". {JP-5} [156:21] In 7.2.1.4 "Defined assignment statement", in paragraph 1, replace the reference "4.5.2" with "4.5.5". {JP-6} [157:6] In 7.2.1.4 "Defined assignment statement", in paragraph 2, list item (2)(b), replace the reference "4.5.2" with "4.5.5". {JP-7} [160:3] In 7.2.2.4 "Procedure pointer assignment", at the beginning of the first sentence of paragraph 1, delete the second "the". {GB-10, Delete the third word of the sentence.} [265:4] In 10.10.4 "List-directed output", in paragraph 1, sentence 2, replace "comma" with "COMMA" following "decimal edit mode is". {JP-9, make the 'comma' that is the name of a decimal edit mode upper case.} [269:10] In 10.11.3.5 "Blanks", in the third bullet item, replace "comma" with "COMMA" following "decimal edit mode is". {JP-10} [390:29] 13.7.157 "SPACING (X)", Result Value, 1st sentence, Replace "MIN" subscript on "e" in the exponent of "b" with "min". {JP-13, probably in math mode, so \rm{MIN} -> \text{min}.} [419:16] In 14.11.24 "IEEE_SUPPORTED_DATATYPE...", in the first line of the Example section, insert a space after "IEC 60559:1989". {GB-19} [420:8] In 14.11.26 "IEEE_SUPPORT_DIVIDE..." in Case (i) of the Result Value section, insert a space after "IEC 60559:1989". {GB-20} [442:19] In 16.3.1 "Classes of local identifiers", in the first sentence of paragraph 3, replace the reference "12.4.3.2" with "12.4.3.4". {GB-21, 12.4.3.2 is Interface block; 12.4.3.4 is Generic interfaces where the referenced information is located.} [455:21] In 16.6.5 "Events that cause variables to become defined", in the first sentence of list item (3), replace "data is" with "data are". {GB-22} [491:31] C.6.3 "OPEN statement", p10 line 3, Replace opening and closing ''' delimiters with '" and "' respectively. {JP-17, LaTeX is emitting the wrong style of quote marks around the string following CH2= in the example code.} [517:26] In C.11.1 "Runtime environments", in bullet 4 of paragraph 2, replace "data is" with "data are". {GB-23} ===END===