J3/17-181 To: J3 From: Malcolm Cohen Subject: Editor's report on DIS production Date: 2017 June 29 1. Papers from Tuesday. 159r1 Done. 150r1 Done. 151 Done. 153r1 Done with modification: Did the first edit as per the instructions, which do not end up with the result claimed (it has "with it" not "with the initial-data-target"; I think that "with it" is fine). 157r1 Done. 162 Done. 165 alternative wording for first edit, Done with modification: Also de-indexed everything in Annex A, as that is just a recapitulation of normative requirements elsewhere (most hyperlinks in Annex A were already non-indexed). 167 Done. 168 Done. 169 Done. 170 Done. 152r1 Done. 166 Done. 172 Done with modification: Also changed the reference for the term "established coarray" from "5.4.7 Coarray" to "5.4.8 Established coarrays". 173 Done with modification: Did some extra hyperlinking. 174 Done. 175 Done. 147 Done, hyperlinking the table names; the table number references are now automatically generated. 149 Done. 171 Done with modifications. [xvii] Added comma before inserting "and". [62:34] Inserted comma that was missing from this 3-item list. [409:12] Ditto for MAXLOC at [406:2]. 2. Papers from Wednesday 177r1 Done with modifications: [278:15] Inserted space after 0X. [538:39+] semicolon not full stop. 155r2 Done with modification: Improved (I hope) the wording in the intro. 179 Done. 142r1 Done. 146r2 Done. 154r2 Done with modification. Reworded the result value paragraph to be more like our usual phrasing. 163r1 Done. 164r1 Done. 178 Done. 3. Papers from Thursday 180r1 Done with modification: Put the new constraint after C1138 to which it is relevant, rather than after C1139 which is about IEEE. 161r2 Done with complete rewriting of the paragraph - made more similar to other similar situations' text - specify that "failed image" is an error condition thus when STAT is absent error termination will be initiated. i.e. instead of "If the STAT argument is present in an invocation of an atomic subroutine and an error condition occurs, it is assigned a positive value, and any other argument that is not INTENT (IN) becomes undefined. If the ATOM argument is on a failed image, the value is STAT_FAILED_IMAGE from ISO_FORTRAN_ENV. If any other error condition occurs, the value is processor dependent and different from STAT_FAILED_IMAGE." it now reads "If the STAT argument is present in an invocation of an atomic subroutine and an error condition occurs, any other argument that is not INTENT (IN) becomes undefined. If the ATOM argument is on a failed image, an error condition occurs and the value STAT_FAILED_IMAGE from the intrinsic module ISO_FORTRAN_ENV is assigned to the STAT argument. If any other error condition occurs, the STAT argument is assigned a processor-dependent positive value that is different from the value of STAT_FAILED_IMAGE." 148r3 Done with modification: Instead of "current when the CHANGE TEAM construct began execution" Inserted "current when the CHANGE TEAM statement was executed" which I think is less ambiguous as to what team is intended (paper version sounds like it might mean the new team not the original team, which is what I think was intended). ===END===